Congratulations to mistressmarilyn who won this challenge!
We are sorry to say that frostbit_sky has/have been voted out of this round. Remember, we all want to improve our writing, and please accept the feedback offered as constructive criticism intended only to help you improve your writing skills. We hope you have enjoyed the experience, will continue to read and vote for the remainder of this round, and will return for the next round.
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